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   学生姓名:洪韵

   所在学校:深圳市行知小学

   所在年级:四年级

   案例说明:该生自一年级起参加课题实验,以下是她在实验三年后创作的探险故事,内容生动活泼,文笔流畅自然,充满了想象力,处处闪现着孩童的纯真与智慧。

   Pet Club Adventure

   Anne, Betty, and Cathy were sisters. They had a magic key. Theyliked animals, so they each had a pet. Anne had a cat. Betty had a rabbit, and Cathy had a little dog.

   One day, Betty was washing her rabbit. Suddenly, the magic key began to glow. It was time for a magic adventure.

   The magic took the sisters and their pets to a pet castle. There was a pet club in the castle.

   “Is anybody in?” Cathy knocked at the door and asked.

   “Coming!” a man’s voice came out. The sisters went inside the club, hugging their pets closely.

   “I’m a pet teacher,” said the man. “Today, I will teach you how to give your pets a bath. First, place a bowl in front of you. Next, fill it with water. Then, wash your pets with the dish cloth. That’s all. Understood?”

   “What? Use the dish cloth? Are you sure about that?” asked Betty.

   “Sure!” said the pet teacher. “And I can sing a song for you while you are doing the washing.”

   “A-B-C. Clean. Clean. Clean. Do-re-mi, Clean. Clean. Clean.” The song went like this. It was quite a funny song.

   So the sisters washed and washed and washed. But they could not make their pets clean however hard they tried. The pets were still very dirty.

   “Ok. Now let’s draw your pets on the paper,” said the pet teacher.

   The sisters got their dirty pets out of the bowls and began to draw. Cathy was the first. A pet dog appeared on her paper. Suddenly, Anne shouted, “Oh! Look! The dog you painted is coming out of the paper and spitting out blobs of red paint!”

   “Come on! Run!” yelled the pet teacher. “Run! Run! Run!”

   “What happened?” asked Anne.

   “I don’t know,” said Betty.

   “I don’t know, but it is fun. I want to stay here,” said Cathy.

   “No. Just run!” said Anne and Betty.

   The sisters ran.

   “Come back! Don’t be afraid. The dog is gone. Come back and finish our class,” yelled the man, but the sisters wouldn’t listen to him. They ran and ran. Their pets also ran after them.

   Just then, the magic key began to glow. The magic took them home.“What a weird adventure!” said Anne and Betty.

   “A-B-C. Clean. Clean. Clean. Do-re-mi, Clean. Clean. Clean.”

   “We like this song,” said Anne and Betty, “but not the dog.”

   “What a pity!” said Cathy, “I think he is pretty cute.”

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